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Nov 15Liked by Oscar Ruto Chemelil

Just beautiful. I loved the concept of forbidden fruit personified by the blue-eyed star child (the repetition was perfect, it felt like a soft whisper.)The baptism reference is amazing. The whole story feels like a surreal dream, like a vaporous memory inside the mind of an (older now) adolescent. It’s chilling, almost like a very elaborate horror movie (like something out of Ari Aster’s films)

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